Tier 2 - Clarity and Flow, and Paragraph-Level Coherence

Best for essays that might sound repetitive or choppy

$35.00 for first 1000 words; additional $25.00 for each portion of 1000 words thereafter (i.e. 1001-2000, 2001-3000, etc.)

• Improving awkward phrasing

• Eliminating repetition and redundancy

• Improving basic transitional words and phrases

• Light sentence restructuring suggestions

• Topic sentence strength check and/or comments

• Logical organization within paragraphs (coherence)

• Stronger transitional words and phrases

• Eliminating off-topic sentences (unity)

For example:

"This shows school is important. School helps people. School is good." ➡️ "This demonstrates the importance of education in shaping personal and professional  growth."

Suggesting paragraph edits so sentence structure clearly supports the thesis