Tier 3 - Academic Tone, Thesis or Argument Strengthening, Evidence Integration and Analysis

Best for Grade 11-12 academic essays (literary analysis, persuasive essays, social sciences papers), university prep, or first-year university students wanting to transition to academic writing

$50.00 for first 1000 words; additional $40.00 for each portion of 1000 words thereafter (i.e. 1001-2000, 2001-3000, etc.)

• Informal language revision suggestions

• Suggestions to eliminate/reduce slang and contractions (if required by the prompt)

• Strengthening academic vocabulary

• Improving formality

• Clarifying thesis statements

• Strengthening claims

• Improving logical flow of argument

• Eliminating weak generalizations

• Improving quote integration

• Ensuring analysis goes beyond summary

• Eliminating "quote dumping"

For example:

"A lot of people think..." ➡️ "Many scholars agree..."

Specific, arguable, evidence-driven thesis suggestions

Adding context before and analysis after quotations/evidence